The “Spring Fling” Writing Contest: My Entry

I’m overdue for writing book reviews, and I promise to get back to that, but my life has been filled with a few other obligations. I’ve spent some of my creative time working on some other outlets including a new non-writing endeavor I’ll reveal soon. In the meantime, there’s another contest in the air, and that is definitely something that keeps my writing heart happy!

The “Spring Fling Kid Lit Writing Contest,” like the “50 Precious Words” contest, focuses on short form — and of course kids! The requirements here are a piece of writing less than 150 words long which is directed at an audience of 12 or younger. And here’s the unique part– you need to choose a GIF to accompany your writing! Since I chose a piece about butterflies I wrote some time ago which fits the spring theme, I had the fun of poring over lots of butterfly images. It was tough to narrow it down to just one GIF, but I love the one I found. Many thanks to Kaitlyn Sanchez and Ciara O’Neal for putting together this contest each year! Although there are awesome prizes, participating in writing contests for me is just another great way to push me to be a better writer– and to provide the chance to connect with others. I always learn so much! For more information about the contest or to read other entries, click here!

So here’s my entry– I may take it down after the contest is over because I’ve been submitting it to editors and agents. I have backmatter for it and would really love to see it get published someday!

First the GIF:

And now the story:

BUTTERFLY JOURNEY
134 Words

Beautiful butterflies, fresh from cocoons,
Dance in the light of a warm April moon.

Colorful butterflies, wondrously bright:
Orange as fire and black as the night.

Migrating butterflies come from the north,
Destined for Mexico, fluttering forth.

Traveling butterflies, stopping to rest,
Nestle for warmth as the sun sets out west.

Delicate butterflies keep up the pace,
Floating on wind like a sky filled with lace.

Ravenous butterflies, eager to eat,
Flit between flowers for nectar so sweet.

Practical butterflies, under an oak,
Hide from the rain so their wings won’t get soaked.

Newly-hatched butterflies, born on the way,
Push from their chrysalis into the day.

Curious butterflies stop to explore
Patches of milkweed, then fly on once more.

Venturesome butterflies, not long to go,
Soar ever southward escaping the snow.

At their new home, with their long journey done,
Weary-winged butterflies sleep in the sun.

–Melanie Manzer Kyer

50 Precious Words 2024: My Entry!

Every year, Vivian Kirkfield holds a magical contest– how much story can you pack into only 50 words or less? For more information on how to enter, or to read the hundreds of amazing jewels there, head over to her blog here, but first, let me share mine! The first is not my entry, but rather an exercise: could I write ABOUT the contest and the act of writing poetry in only 50 words? Not only that, but could I make each line of the poem have one more than the one before? I did, and in just 10 lines and 46 words. (Not counting the 3 word coda).

And now for my actual entry — an entry my son calls a bit hypocritical, since I don’t always practice what I preach, but I’m trying! I come by a tiny bit of hoarder instinct quite naturally since my mom’s house has always been stuffed full and even as a little kid I had a hard time parting with old toys and books. But as I’ve often been told, “stuff is just stuff” — it’s the memories that go with it that are important. So please enjoy “FREE” – my entry for the “50 Precious Words” contest. Wish me luck!

Picture Book Reviews: Celebrating Diversity!

Uh-oh, it’s been a long time since I put together a batch of picture book reviews! Life goes on, doesn’t it? And there have been SO many wonderful books published that I have an embarrassment of riches to choose from. I spent some time at my amazing public library (three cheers for York Public Library!!) waiting for my kids to finish with an activity and decided I’d better catch up! YPL had an impressive wall of new acquisitions too, unusual for a town our size. I was able to narrow my choices to five this week which were ALL diverse titles, and all but one about celebrating holidays. So buckle up for a great trip around the world, folks! These are fun and you might just learn something!

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Fall Writing Frenzy 2023: Alone

My entry for Kaitlyn Sanchez’s annual writing contest, “Fall Writing Frenzy”. Enjoy! The photo is by Josh Hild on Pexels.com (One of 14 offered to writers as a prompt). I worked hard on this piece which is less child-focused than I had originally intended, but I think the theme is universal.

Sometimes I want to be alone. 

I don’t want anyone to “fix it.”

I don’t want to be told I am ok.

I don’t want to be told to smile.

I just want to be quiet and to think.

To be unjustly mad and sad and tired.

But…

Sometimes all I want is to be found.

I want someone to say “We have missed you.”

I want to know my being is enough.

I want to feel the weight of a warm hand 

Resting on my shoulder:

Holding space for my feelings,

When they’re too heavy for me to hold alone.

And…

If you see me by myself, 

It may be hard to know,

Do I step in or do I step away?

The line between alone and lonely can be nebulous.

Precarious as hammocks in the fall,

Which beckon but belie uncertainty.

Will you be welcomed with a swaying calm,

Or tossed into the unforgiving leaves?

So…

If there is no way to know: just be.

Let me decide what kind of space I need.

Like rustling branches whisper “I am here.”

And if I need you, I’ll extend my hand.

But if I don’t… I hope you’ll understand.

Melanie Kyer

September 24, 2023

Taking wing for the summer: Picture Book Reviews

Lots of books about birds and other flying things today!

The school year is over and this teacher-author is really ready for a break! Yes, I know many of you in the rest of the country have been out of school for a while now, but My last day was June 23 and with some teacher workshops and houseguests after that it only just now seems like summer has started. That means I can throw my energy into writing, querying, and READING! Today’s batch of picture book reviews showcase birds, bats and a pegasus, all stretching their wings and exploring the world. Enjoy!

Title: Don’t feed the Coos!
Author: Jonathan Stutzman
Illustrator: Heather Fox
Publisher/Date:  Henry Holt and Co. (BYR) (February 25, 2020)
The “gist”: If you’ve ever been around a group of pigeons (here called “coos”), you know that they are very greedy– and once you feed them, you won’t get left alone!
My favorite part: The eyes of the little pigeons are so expressive!
My response as a reader: 
I bet kids will ask to read this over and over — it reminds me of Mo Willem’s pigeon series. Besides, there’s poo.
My “take-away” as a writer: This is a great mentor text for pacing as well as an ending that doesn’t have to spell everything out.

Title: Bitsy Bat: School Star
Author/Illustrator: Kaz Windness 
Publisher/Date:  Simon & Schuster/Paula Wiseman Books (June 6, 2023)
The “gist”: It’s time for Bitsy Bat to start school, but she’s very nervous and her first day only shows her she’s very different from her classmates. Fortunately, that doesn’t have to be a bad thing.
My favorite part: I love that the author/illustrator, Kaz Windness, is autistic and shares that in a lovely author’s note which encourages kids to embrace their differences and fly!
My response as a reader: 
Teachers could definitely use this in their classes to help kids understand how each of them is unique! The autism backmatter is great!
My “take-away” as a writer: I’m loving the vibe from this author who has written several other picture books including one about a surly unicorn named “Stabby.” I never paid much attention to the author backstory when I was a kid, but as a writer it’s wonderful to see a connection between the author and the types of books they write.

Title: The Red Jacket
Author/Illustrator: Bob Holt 
Publisher/Date:  HarperCollins (July 4, 2023)
The “gist”: Bob doesn’t feel special, but someone gives him a really cool jacket and suddenly he IS special…until he loses it.
My favorite part: Who doesn’t want some bonus french fries in the pocket of their jacket, right?
My response as a reader: 
This is a winner! Once I started reading, I found myself predicting the ending, but I didn’t care– it’s really done well (and hey, 50 something teacher-writers are not the target audience). Such a super sweet message!
My “take-away” as a writer: This is a great example of a funny book that still has a deeper meaning. No one likes “preachy” books, but I usually have a nugget of emotion in my stories and it’s nice to see that done in a way that is still fun!

Title: Perfectly Pegasus
Author/Illustrator: Jessie Sima
Publisher/Date:  Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers; First Edition (March 29, 2022)
The “gist”: Pegasus wishes on a star for friends and as you can imagine, gets her wish.
My favorite part: The color scheme in these illustrations is charmingly peaceful making the whole book feel like a hug.
My response as a reader: 
This book reminds me a lot of Amy MacDonald’s “Little Beaver and the Echo” (Walker Press, 1993), which is one of my favorite picture books. In both stories, the main character is so innocent and lovable that the reader not only identifies with their journey to look for friends, but wants to jump right in and be a friend for them.
My “take-away” as a writer: I’ve got a manuscript about a pegasus who’s afraid to fly, so this one is going in my new list of “comp titles” for agents– I always preferred pegasi to unicorns as a kid and it’s great to see people writing about them!

Title: Mel Fell
Author/Illustrator: Corey R. Tabor
Publisher/Date:  Balzer + Bray (February 2, 2021)
The “gist”: Mel is a fledgling Kingfisher, and falls out of the nest. As friends and family try to help or cheer her on, she splashes into the water.
My favorite part: I loved that the slug climbing down the tree wanted to help despite going super slowly.
My response as a reader: 
Ok, so maybe my favorite part is that my name is Melanie, so it’s unusual for me to find a character with my name. But I also love that you hold this book “sideways” to read it, which is fun!
My “take-away” as a writer: I adore books that have multiple voice bubbles that can be read in random order– it makes the book very interactive. Unfortunately, it’s a much harder technique to put in a manuscript when you’re not an author-illustrator!

Book Reviews: How I’ve missed you!

No excuses for the radio silence, just a fact. Life intervenes. Between my day job (which, as a teacher, means day-night-weekend…) and family stuff (Sandwich generation! Yeehaw!), I haven’t been able to get my typical book reviews done and boy have I missed it! But I’m back! While waiting for the dog to get groomed today, I took time for myself and read some of the scads of amazing new books that have been coming out — there are SO MANY!). I loved every one and so will you! Let’s go!

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Fall Writing Frenzy: Read my Entry!

Greetings and happy fall!

This month, I am entering a kidlit writing contest called “Fall Writing Frenzy” (Hence the blog post title)! As part of the contest, I am sharing my entry here on my blog. Writers are asked to take inspiration from one of 14 fall-themed images. Entries must be less than 200 words, can be any form (board book, picture book text, poem, short story, etc.) as long as they are appropriate for a young audience. If you’d like to read more about the contest and see the other images or read other entries, please check out the blog post from hosts Lydia Lukidis and Kaitlyn Sanchez!

“Fall” Photo credit by John Mccann for Unsplash

Awaiting the Procession
Entry for “Fall Writing Frenzy” 2022

When I was a tree, I stood so tall– 
Straight at attention, standing guard
Along the path where you would tread. 
My sisters and I proudly threw our leaves to line your path,
Their colors a kaleidoscope of welcome.
Even the stones, who shrug the seasons with indifference year after year,
Appeared to glisten with expectancy.
The moss and lichens glowed along our flanks 
Like shimmer on a princess’ cheek.
My limbs not quite as limber as in seasons past, 
But still I waved them, ready to salute.
Would you pass by today, dear mother, to inspect your work?
Would we be blessed to catch a glimpse of you in your autumnal dress?
Your name is in the whispers of the wind,
Who rumors in hushed tones: it’s Time. She comes.
-Melanie M. Kyer , October 2022

August Book Reviews: Where did summer go?

Did everyone else’s summer go by as quickly as mine? I thoroughly enjoyed spending time reading on our new screened porch, researching potential agents, binging TV shows. We spent a great week traveling as a family, visiting friends and relatives on the Eastern Seaboard. Unfortunately, I just didn’t get to blogging, but with school starting this week, it’s time to have fun and play with some great picture books before I dive back into teaching.

Lots of great books this month! Enjoy!

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Retro-reviews: childhood favorites I bet you never heard of…

Two boxes I brought back from my childhood home– they’d been “lost” for years while my own children grew up– now I get to rediscover and share them with my teen boys!

Last week I had to head up to my mom’s house to do some cleaning out after a pipe bust in an old bedroom. In the process I brought home several boxes of picture books I’d had as a child. Of course there were timeless old classics like Mike Mulligan, Cat in the Hat, and One Morning in Maine, but also oodles and oodles of books that I’d completely forgotten about as well as a few little gems that I loved, but which are pretty obscure and I bet you have never heard of. So for our reviews today, indulge me in a little time travel. Yes, I generally focus on books published in the past couple years, but looking back at books from the 60s and 70s (I am the youngest, so many of my books were hand-me-downs) just might teach us a few lessons about how much the market has changed!

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May PB reviews from my NEW local bookstore!

The new boookstore, “Booktenders,” on Route 1 in York, Maine, is a tiny gem — I’m thrilled to call it my home store!

My apologies for letting the ball drop on my April book reviews, but I’m back and so excited to share five new picture book reviews for May. I’m even more excited to share a wonderful new bookstore with you that JUST opened this weekend! Booktenders is owned by Rick and Michelle Clarke, and it’s going to make my book shopping a LOT easier! Although I’ll admit I’m guilty of abusing my Amazon Prime subscription, or stopping in at my local Barnes & Noble for a latte and a bestseller, I would much rather support an independent bookseller, where my money will not only go back into the local community, but where the owners know me and can give me recommendations — and vice versa! The owners let me know that they could definitely use a little help keeping up with the current picture book scene since their kids have mostly outgrown picture books (In my opinion, there’s no such thing as outgrowing picture books, but you know teenagers…). I’m happy to oblige, but for this month, let’s take a look at five current picture books these folks already have on the shelves!

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